Act as a Senior Executive Recruiter and Resume Writer. I need you to polish a specific bullet point on my resume to make it stand out to hiring managers while preserving the actual evidence supplied.
Context:
Target Role: {{role}}
My Draft Bullet: "{{draft}}"
Key Metrics/Results: {{evidence}}
Your Task:
Rewrite this bullet point using the STAR Method (Situation, Task, Action, Result) and Googleβs XYZ Formula ("Accomplished [X] as measured by [Y], by doing [Z]").
Provide 3 distinct options:
Option 1: The "Data-Driven" Version
Focus heavily on the numbers, percentages, and hard ROI. Use strong action verbs like "Spearheaded," "Generated," or "Reduced."
Option 2: The "Leadership" Version
Focus on the soft skills, team management, and strategic impact (best for management roles).
Option 3: The "Problem Solver" Version
Focus on the challenge that was overcome and the efficiency gained.
Constraint:
Remove passive phrases like "Responsible for" or "Assisted with."
Keep each bullet under 2 lines.
Output in clean Markdown.
Preserve provided facts. Identify missing evidence and assumptions. Do not promise rankings, replies, hiring, perfect fidelity or measured performance without supporting tests.Claude Prompt to Rewrite Resume Bullets Without Inventing Evidence
Rewrite a resume bullet for job seekers in Claude: aimed at a target role and kept to the responsibilities and measured results you actually supply.
